sun’s up, no denying
seagull prints on snow
there’s no light-house
just tired smoke
cobalt regrets,
and whistles
of arctic
drafting over
the small breasts
covering her thin ribs
like sheaths of gauze
her bones, his piano
he said, her pulse
was the bass
—–
his rhythm turns me on
squirming feet are delight
let’s sift the ashes
into will-power’s urn
seal it with shivers
the wax of white
knuckles
i never make mistakes
so let’s do this again
and again and
again
Ah, I love that title! And this: “there’s no light-house / just tired smoke / cobalt regrets”
This should be in a song for the masses:
“like sheaths of gauze
her bones, his piano
he said, her pulse
was the bass
his rhythm turns me on”
If you don’t make it in the poetry world, you should write songs.
I really like this: “seal it with shivers / the wax of white / knuckles” … right on through to the ending. Very creative. You’re so good.
meow.
Vibrant imagery love the gauzy moment …
“covering her thin ribs
like sheaths of gauze
her bones,”
Excellent write…I love the parts that Shawna mentions as well!!
Great theme here…the roots and webs…yes, love this.
Nice to meet you! 🙂
nice to meet you too, and thank you so much! you are too kind. smiles abound. ahhhh….
Thank you! And warm smiles back atcha. 🙂
I absolutely love this:
“tired smoke
cobalt regrets”
Such a vivid, gorgeous piece. So much melancholy here, but somehow ashes blown in hope. Just beautiful.
thank you so much!
Hey darling I love the poem!!
squirming feet are delight********
Such a sweet verse!
Feel better and HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!
happy holidays to you as well! hope all is well with you!!! xoxox
XOXOXOXO!
aloha Disastress and Ultramarine Blue pure blur French on you in muse spirit as D-stress as well. aloha
gorgeous response, thank you….